
I couldn't see anything, darkness wrapped around me. My heart was beating as fast as the flap of a bird's wing. Suddenly I went past a flash of yellow light then another and another. I could just make out a picture it was an arrow pointing which way I was going. Suddenly a mountain of water came splashing in my face. Then I swam to the steps.
My journey down the waterslide was over in twenty seconds. I was definitely doing that again.
by Harry
Good descrpitive writing it makes me feel like being in a hydroslide.
ReplyDeleteFrom Jack M
Nice story Harry it was really good.
ReplyDeleteFrom Edward
what a good peace of writting harry
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