Waiting for the green light, my heart was beating as fast as a dribbling basketball. My blood was pumping through my veins like petrol through pistons. My hands gripped onto the slide as I pushed heavily away from the waiting queue. My body felt excited as the water splashed on my face. Finally at the bottom, a gush of water burst in to my face. The Hammer pool was the best activity out of everything on camp.
By Josh
Wow what a fantastic hook for your writing Josh! You make me want to read more and to go to Hanmer myself to have a go at the hyroslide!
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Rob
WOW!Josh I really like your hook the start is very gripping.I liked the hidroslides too!
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It looked fun Josh, the whole camp seemed to enjoy the hydroslide. I enjoyed the hot pools and my coffee in the cafe with the teachers and parents.
ReplyDeleteawesome josh
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