Tuesday, 7 September 2010

Surprise Quake
I wake up
Its dark, but daylight outside.
Rattle, things on my draws are shaking like marbles in a glass jar.
I get under my bed, scramble quickly.
The rumble dies.
Shaking I get out from under my safe cover.
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  1. sue7 September 2010 at 16:10

    Thanks Bayley. You have used some strong action verbs. I see you have even used personification.'Rumble dies'. Well done

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