Wednesday, 8 September 2010

shake rattle and roll

sky rumbling

fear growing

power escaping

glass smashing

stop start

off on

after shocks still shaking

2 comments:

  1. Great Gabby- love the metaphor of 'Fear growing'

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  2. Anna just read your poem and thought it was good. She added a line after
    'After shocks still shaking'
    History making!

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