Monday 6 September 2010

Lucy's Earthquake Poem

Earthquake surprises us
Around us shaking
Roaring sounds
Tapping at the window
Helpless feelings
Quick run
Under the door frame
All together we are safe
Keep filling the water bottles
Earth is powerful.
By Lucy Simpson

2 comments:

  1. Well done Lucy. You are the first to rise to the challenge. I love the 'Tapping at the window' line- great personification. Sue

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  2. Oh dear me I am really a bit slow of the mark today!! I've just realised your poem was an acrostic. That shows you how good it was- I didn't notice the letters at the beginning because it had me gripped reading it right through.

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